On_the_other_hand,_our parents can help us set up our aim, urge_us_to_finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying.

　　第四步：句式升级造亮点

　　1．用含since原因状语和so that 结果状语改写句1

　　Most of us think our parents should not accompany us studying at school since_it_makes_us_fall_into_the_habit_of_dependence,_so_that_we_won't_form_the_good_habit_of_studying.

　　2．用it 作形式主语改写句2

　　It is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves.

　　3．用to do 不定式作目的状语改写句4

　　Accompanying_us_studying_at_school_can_let_us_take_advantage_of_more_time_to_be_devoted_to_our_studies.

　　第五步：过渡衔接联成篇

　　Dear editor，

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school.

　　We haven't reached consensus on this matter.Most of us think our parents should not accompany us studying at school since it makes us fall into the habit of dependence, so that we won't form the good habit of studying.What's more, it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves.At the same time it affects our parents' work and rest.

　　While about 30% of my classmates think it necessary to accompany us studying at school.Accompanying us studying at school can let us take advantage of more time to be devoted to our studies.Besides, we shall be healthier for their cooking.On the other hand, our parents can help us set up our aim, urge us to finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying.

　　Yours_truly，

　　Li_Hua