2.(演讲注意事项)要面带微笑;要讲慢些,讲清楚。
Be sure to wear a smile on your face.Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly.
→Be sure to wear a smile on your face when you speak, which will make you relaxed.Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges.
[分析] 加蓝部分是根据语境所追加的成分,如"which will make you relaxed"指出"演讲时微笑"的好处;"so that you can ..."为"讲慢些,讲清楚"的目的,留下好印象是"演讲"效果之一,也是能否获得评委青睐的因素之一。适当增加与所给信息相关的时间、原因、结果、条件、目的等成分来表达细节内容,能够使习作流畅、丰满,达到应有的表达效果。
[专题过关训练]
请发挥合理想象,扩展句子(请注意括号内提供的语境)
1.(开设英语电影欣赏课)建议多选择英语电影。
As_a_young_student,_I suggest the teacher choose more English films that appeal_to_us_teenagers,_thus making_English_learning_more_interesting.
2.(讨论学生带手机问题)不允许学生带手机。
Students are forbidden to take a cellphone in_order_not_to_affect_our_studies/so_as_not_to_disturb_others_in_class.
3.(去看电影)你最好早点到。
In_order_to_get_a_good_seat_for_seeing,_you'd better arrive a bit earlier.
4.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)(通知学校放映电影)这部英文短片主要与我们学校的发展有关。
The English short film is mainly related to the development of our school, which_will_greatly_help_us_students_know_the_school's_history_better_and_appeal_to_us_to_make_contributions_to_our_school's_development.
5.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)(介绍学校体育馆)体育场馆已经建立起来,许多运动项目可在里面举行。
To begin with, a new stadium has been built up,which_has_become_the_new_landmark_in_our_school.Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of_which_table_tennis,_football_as_well_as_running_competitions_enjoy_great_popularity.
6.(2018·北京高考书面表达)(咨询来北京上大学)建议你上北京大学,中国文学专业适合你。