第九处：which改为that。考查特殊句型。正是他鼓舞人心的经历和来自清华大学的温暖吸引了公众的注意。本句为强调句型it be＋被强调部分＋that/who...，故改为that。

　　第十处：final改为finally。考查副词。此处表示"努力最终会得到回报"。修饰动词用副词，因此改为finally。

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　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　(2018·甘肃省兰州市高考诊断考试)

　　Now I'd like to share with you a strange experience I had a month before.It may sound funny，and it's true.After a day's hard work I went to bed early than usual.It was about two o'clock in the morning，and suddenly I woke up.I heard a noise.I got out of bed and went slow downstairs.I listened carefully.I could heard two men speaking quietly.I believed two thieves had broken into my house and I was really frightened，so I went back to upstairs，and immediately phone the police from my bedroom.The police arrived quickly.They opened front door with a special key and went into the living room.You can imagine what embarrassed I was when they came upstairs and told me we had turned the television off for me and everything was all right.

　　【答案】

　　Now I'd like to share with you a strange experience I had a month .It may sound funny， it's true.After a day's hard work I went to bed than usual.It was about two o'clock in the morning，and suddenly I woke up.I heard a noise.I got out of bed and went downstairs.I listened carefully.I could two men speaking quietly.I believed two thieves had broken into my house and I was really frightened，so I went back upstairs，and immediately the police from my bedroom.The police arrived quickly.They opened front door with a special key and went into the living room.You can imagine embarrassed I was when they came upstairs and told me had turned the television off for me and everything was all right.

　　第一处：before改为ago。考查副词。根据句中的had可知，此处应用副词ago。

　　第二处：and改为but。考查连词。根据语境可知，上下文表示逻辑上的转折关系，故用连词but。

　　第三处：early改为earlier。考查副词比较级。根据句中的than可知，此处用副词比较级作状语，修饰动词went。

第四处：slow改为slowly。考查副词。此处应用副词slowly修饰动词went，在句子中作状语。